Destiny of a coal
Burnt in the air at last
So was I, just a moving dust
And times layered me underground
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I Cannot Began To Say How Ever So Deeply Beautiful This Is! ! ! ! ! Soul, Every Line Strikes And So Beautifully Shines! ! ! ! ! With A Heart Ever So Pure And Kind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! saved Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! ! !
Like coal to diamond! Respecting the ways of life. Nice piece of work.
Own me Not for a shine Stare me, your spirit to find Like coal to diamond v nice... liked
how lovely and great.... love details are always in addition...i believe the point you have mentioned dear soul, a light must be light..must do the work that a light is responsible for............my words are going to finished o describe this work. ben fatto...
awesome work i love ur style and the story so inspiring
reliving and the new spirits. always lovely and inspiring always shake the hearts well written..always unique.. well done.
This is a great poem. I loved it. Simple, straight full of feelings and a hidden meaning. Wish you a very happy, prosperous and a healthy New Year :)
Aweinspiring psychological poem. To the tune of 'A diamond starts out as a coal waitin to b polishd. Hapy new yr soul'
the coal- the dark of the darkness beget the diamond.... very nicely written - Shaleheen
Such an in depth write. When you write it really comes from your soul. Your name truly is you. Well done
Its soul is like a coal to diamond molded in a fire of love, profound description!
Be it coal, be it diamond Each a beauty on its own Coal for its fire Diamond for desire With them we build an empire! Nice write soul....a big 10.
Once you were a chunk of coal buried deep. You let the fire go through you and now you have evolved into a diamond, sparkling and dispersing light! It requires enormous pain and mammoth levels of patience for this splendid transformation. A great write! !
Enjoyed the read. Enjoyed the spiritual flavor of the poem. You might like to check out a few of my poems...you may find spirituality flowing through them also. A Solitary Note or Words from a Master might be of interest. Cheers!
Dear Soul, Once Bri Edwards begins to comment you become more popular. He is very emphatic and more or less authentic in his views.. This write is your new year GIFT to us for it is a poem par excellent the ones posted by many of us over here. Happy new year, dear spirited Soul...
Cut me still, cut me more Scars me on the edges of my skin I bleed with spectrum light amazement Multifaceted shine embraced for more beautiful Own me Not for a shine Stare me, your spirit to find Like coal to diamond...........touching expression with quality of diamond. Beautiful poem inscribed astutely. Thanks for sharing.