Saturday, December 28, 2013

Quantum Of Spirit Comments

Rating: 4.2

Destiny of a coal
Burnt in the air at last
So was I, just a moving dust
And times layered me underground
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Unwritten Soul
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2017

Cut me still, cut me more Scars me on the edges of my skin I bleed with spectrum light amazement Multifaceted shine embraced for more beautiful Own me Not for a shine Stare me, your spirit to find Like coal to diamond...........touching expression with quality of diamond. Beautiful poem inscribed astutely. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 September 2017

I Cannot Began To Say How Ever So Deeply Beautiful This Is! ! ! ! ! Soul, Every Line Strikes And So Beautifully Shines! ! ! ! ! With A Heart Ever So Pure And Kind! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! saved Look Forward To Reading More! ! ! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 June 2016

Like coal to diamond! Respecting the ways of life. Nice piece of work.

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Saadat Tahir 22 August 2014

Own me Not for a shine Stare me, your spirit to find Like coal to diamond v nice... liked

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Neela Nath Das 18 May 2014

A poem on spirituality.A fabulous one Soul!

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Marco Angelo 27 March 2014

how lovely and great.... love details are always in addition...i believe the point you have mentioned dear soul, a light must be light..must do the work that a light is responsible for............my words are going to finished o describe this work. ben fatto...

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 24 March 2014

awesome work i love ur style and the story so inspiring

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 19 March 2014

reliving and the new spirits. always lovely and inspiring always shake the hearts well written..always unique.. well done.

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Jinal Oswal 22 January 2014

This is a great poem. I loved it. Simple, straight full of feelings and a hidden meaning. Wish you a very happy, prosperous and a healthy New Year :)

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 17 January 2014

Aweinspiring psychological poem. To the tune of 'A diamond starts out as a coal waitin to b polishd. Hapy new yr soul'

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Maria Goodison 17 January 2014

Really like this one keep up the good work.

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 09 January 2014

the coal- the dark of the darkness beget the diamond.... very nicely written - Shaleheen

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Teddy Moses 07 January 2014

Wow, a free Spirit in the art you are

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Lyn Paul 06 January 2014

Such an in depth write. When you write it really comes from your soul. Your name truly is you. Well done

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Marvin Brato 06 January 2014

Its soul is like a coal to diamond molded in a fire of love, profound description!

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Spiritual Seeker 06 January 2014

Be it coal, be it diamond Each a beauty on its own Coal for its fire Diamond for desire With them we build an empire! Nice write soul....a big 10.

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Valsa George 06 January 2014

Once you were a chunk of coal buried deep. You let the fire go through you and now you have evolved into a diamond, sparkling and dispersing light! It requires enormous pain and mammoth levels of patience for this splendid transformation. A great write! !

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Mike Barrett 05 January 2014

Enjoyed the read. Enjoyed the spiritual flavor of the poem. You might like to check out a few of my poems...you may find spirituality flowing through them also. A Solitary Note or Words from a Master might be of interest. Cheers!

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Mary Amrutha 05 January 2014

grt work..................

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Dinesan Madathil 04 January 2014

Dear Soul, Once Bri Edwards begins to comment you become more popular. He is very emphatic and more or less authentic in his views.. This write is your new year GIFT to us for it is a poem par excellent the ones posted by many of us over here. Happy new year, dear spirited Soul...

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