Quantum Of Space You Fill Comments

Nice poem, beautiful.

A beautiful poem. So much closeness and harmony in it...

Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Why do I feel that you would Come and fill me up as and When I fall ill? ? ...........................fabulous expression! A lovely poem! (10)

An imaginative write with great imagery.++10 Robert

The answer that I cherish for Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives That we have lived here on Earth. Wow, a beautiful poem crafted with so much passion.

It's a beautiful poem! Appreciated the use of simile in the first stanza, 'You have entered me, Like a cool summer breeze'. I love the lucidity of your poetic expression!

dreaming about your love, over the ages. beautifully written. loved it Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Why do I feel that you would Come and fill me up as and When I fall ill? ? thanks for sharing

What made you nostalgic About me and my things, About my feelings, and Sufferings en route to death? Beautiful lines...Enjoyed reading it. 10+++

Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Makes me feel warm with its flow. Thanks. 10+++

Reading this poem, gives my heart a warm feeling, with thoughts of eternity crossing my mind. Excellent poem!

The answer that I cherish for Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives That we have lived here on Earth. nicely penned poem.

The answer that I cherish for Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives That we have lived here on Earth. Nice poem to read. Great love poem. 10

What made you nostalgic About me and my things, About my feelings, and Sufferings en route to death? Beautiful lines...Enjoyed reading it. 10++

So often today You have entered me, Like a cool summer breeze, Through the Sun-burnt grooves. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Why do I feel that you would Come and fill me up as and When I fall ill? ? - - - - - - - - - - -Love is beyond measure- -and this beautiful feeling finds fine expression in the poem.

What made you nostalgic About me and my things, About my feelings, and Sufferings en route to death? Questions for the Soul are always beautiful...awesome work. Thanks for sharing.

Longer we stay, larger we become In dimensions of matter and space. Frameworks of nature mould us Entirely into a person, Novel and distinct. Information, mundane or divine- Starts flowing into us from around. Lovely poem.

I hear and feel the pleas this poem make. Tremendous poem on love. Thanks for sharing.

Poet's PagePoemsQuotesCommentsStatsSend MessageShare on FacebookShare on Twitter Poems by Subhas Chandra Chakra: 63 / 101 « prev. poem next poem » Quantum Of Space You Fill - Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra So often today You have entered me, Like a cool summer breeze, Through the Sun-burnt grooves. Giggles of funny encounters Between us, ages ago- Knock often on my eardrums! Are you so close- Somewhere nearby, Inside Somebody I talk to, interact with? Why does my heart Feel like sobbing the pain Out into the sky nearby? Why do I feel that you would Come and fill me up as and When I fall ill? ? Beautiful poem. Thanks.

So often today You have entered me, Like a cool summer breeze, Through the Sun-burnt grooves. Giggles of funny encounters Between us, ages ago- Knock often on my eardrums! Are you so close- Somewhere nearby, Inside Somebody I talk to, interact with? Beautiful poem worth reading Thanks again for your poem.

What made you nostalgic About me and my things, About my feelings, and Sufferings en route to death? I know you would simply say That you do not know it, The answer that I cherish for Over the ages, and the cycles of Lives That we have lived here on Earth. Sweet poem Sir. Thanks.10 for the poem.