Friday, April 1, 2016

Quantum Of Space You Fill -2 Comments

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And now within myself
You filled the whole of me
The corners and the corridors,
All the routes and the borders
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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

All the oceans of my grief All the narrow lusts for life And desires broad and blue, All the passions Optimized In and Around you. Beautiful expression. Thanks. 10++++++++++

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Thank you Prativa dear for your appreciation and these beautiful remarks.

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Prativa Rani 20 April 2018

All the oceans of my grief All the narrow lusts for life And desires broad and blue, All the passions Optimized In and Around you. Beautiful expression. Thanks.

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Thank you Rani dear for your appreciation and these beautiful remarks.

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 17 November 2017

ll the routes and the borders All the skies of my dreams All the oceans of my griefs All the narrow lusts for life And desires broad and blue, All the passions Optimized In and Around you. Beautiful lines in a beautiful poem.Thank you for sharing this poem10++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thank you SR for the inspiring remarks.

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Rajendra Rout 27 October 2017

Now I have stopped Crying over the spilt milk Craving for the virgin touches Burning for the urges lost Nor for the dreams shattered As there is Not a single inch Not a single moment Not a single place Without you.i enjoy your poem

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thank you RR for the inspiring remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 12 June 2016

Now I have stopped Crying over the spilt milk Craving for the virgin touches Burning for the urges lost Nor for the dreams shattered As there is Not a single inch Not a single moment Not a single place Without you. Best lines in this beautiful poem. Thanks for the sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thank you Sabita mam for the inspiring remarks.

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Asit Kumar Dhir 17 May 2016

All the routes and the borders All the skies of my dreams All the oceans of my grief All the narrow lusts for life And desires broad and blue, All the passions Optimized In and Around you. Beautiful expression. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thank you Asit for the inspiring remarks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Burning for the urges lost! Nice piece of work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 28 November 2017

Thank you Sir for the inspiring remarks.

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