Quality Of Life Comments

You’ve made my life dream off.....a poem of masterpiece of history of life in the making.... i couldn't imagine the imagery of the poem...wonderful art of words....God bless you...10 +++

made me sit and read....... thank you for your kind sharing...

Very Interesting, comparing life to that of a beautiful Peacock;

Interesting and a nice read...........

nice theme. beautiful poem.beautiful rhyming too. voted10 surya

History is my wedlock Even in my moonwalk Showed me lot of mock But for me its cakewalk It made me look like gawk ------- fantastic imagery woven with fine rhymes once again...You are a poet of rhymes...10+++

A beautiful poem in rhymes...............

ya its kinda fun to read....light and easy...with a well managed rhyme well done cheers

A comic-like display of quality of life. The rhyming sounded me really amusing while reading the poem.

Got to follow that path in life.

nice simile: ''Time ticked like clock With bites of roadblock'' of this wonderful realistic poem..10