Friday, October 7, 2016

Quagmire The Queer Comments

Rating: 4.0

Quagmire means a place of marsh or bog,
Lower parts of pool is quagmire water is its mug.
People dislike to dwell in a place of boggy,
But Lotus and lily bloom here also in muggy.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Robert Murray Smith 24 July 2018

An interesting nature write of delight.++10

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bri edwards 01 February 2018

[[ doubt people with 'black skin' would like your usage; at least the 'sensitive' ones, especially those who have suffered discrimination due to skin color]] // this line, especially, bothers me: There is nothing, every thing is beauty is rife. bri ;)

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bri edwards 01 February 2018

** noun: quagmire 1- a soft boggy area of land that gives way underfoot. //synonyms: swamp, morass, bog, marsh, muskeg, mire, slough; archaic quag 2- an awkward, complex, or hazardous situation. (to be continued) ....

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bri edwards 01 February 2018

i don't understand the last two lines: Black skin of body has certain value in life, There is nothing, every thing is beauty is rife..........it sounds like you are saying that Black skin is like a quagmire**. which definition do you mean here? (to be continued) ....

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2016

Kumarmani Mahakul is a thinker and a great teacher, a wonderful preaching poem.......................

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Michael Walker 18 October 2016

Yes, even in an ugly place like a quagmire there can be beauty, like the lotus. I agree, we need to cultivate detachment from things and especially 'avoid wrong works'. Illuminating.M. Walker.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 October 2016

Positiveness! With the respect of life. Nice work.

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