Sunday, July 1, 2018

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Rating: 5.0

Let the past fall into the deep black sea

May the memories lose its vividness
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Edward Kofi Louis 06 July 2020

Nobody can change the past! ! ! However, let us move on with positive morals today! 'Let the past fall into the deep black sea'! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 26 June 2020

A wonderfully authored poem Simply splendid...10++❤️❤️❤️

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2019

Inspiring poem.... Wake up O lost soul and face the reality

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2018

Don't be stuck in the quagmire of insanity Wake up O lost soul and face the reality........so touching and intensive. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 03 July 2018

Powerfully poignant with a resolve to have a rebirth and a challenge to look on the face of realities!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 July 2018

A motivational piece work that builds confidence in a depressed soul! ...Wake up O lost soul and face the reality..! I totally agree with Chinedu! Well penned! Full marks!

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

A poignant rendition of words set aside for sober reflection. An insightful piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Aarzoo.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 July 2018

often the reality makes disappoint because of lacking of confidence!

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 July 2018

Confidence plays an important part in moulding ones persona. Thank you was reading.

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