Sunday, June 3, 2007

(q) 5 (Song) Won'T You Baby? ! Comments

Rating: 3.1

I was hoping to find you there
But you are gone
My heart is in tatters
Completely torn!
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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....it creates its own tune, indeed... stylish work TO. t x

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Patricia Gale 03 June 2007

delightful song filled with emotion.

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This is lyrically beautiful, & quite tune-worthy, indeed, T.O...It's Tone, can be mixed into a Celine Dion type of song, as well as a Pat Benetar, or Green Day song type. Do you write music? ....Great Stuff, young lady! FjR

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