Wednesday, May 16, 2007

(q) 3 (Song) Oh My Love, Will You Come Calling Again? Comments

Rating: 3.1

You showed me a glimpse
And my life will never be the same
You came like a ray of sunlight
Washing away all my stains
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 16 May 2007

Just a eliquint write..........

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Lyrical indeed, is this fine work, T.O.>>>The emotional energy here is as profound, as it is quelling...Once again, you satisfy your readers quench for the best, my dear! FjR

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Sandra Fowler 16 May 2007

A lovely lyric. Your last stanza is especially strong and effective. Warm regards, Sandra

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Michael Shepherd 16 May 2007

Love the lonely tunnel! A single image brings back childhood... Oh Rumi, what you might have missed if you hadn't been you...

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