Thursday, May 10, 2007

(q) 1 (Song) To Rhea! Comments

Rating: 3.2

Bathed in moonlight and sunkissed in the day
Rhea with the long tresses and nowhere to stay
Thin as a waif, will qualify for a model on the ramp
She starves herself to feed her little tramps
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! 31 May 2007

Wow, Rhea gets a song for herself..and its the best i've ever read..this is by far one of your best works! !

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Geoff Warden 11 May 2007

Very well done T>O> each verse echoing sentiments.......

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Sandra Fowler 11 May 2007

Your Rhea is a proud and tragic figure. She deserves a song. Very memorable work. The sadness echoes long after the last line has been written. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed! FjR

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Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed! FjR

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