Bathed in moonlight and sunkissed in the day
Rhea with the long tresses and nowhere to stay
Thin as a waif, will qualify for a model on the ramp
She starves herself to feed her little tramps
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Your Rhea is a proud and tragic figure. She deserves a song. Very memorable work. The sadness echoes long after the last line has been written. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra
Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed! FjR
Hauntingly brilliant work.T.O....SURREAL REALITY IN ITS WRITTEN BEST...lOVE THE WAY YOU ACTUALLY CREATE AN ECHO OF HAUNTING TONE BY WAY OF VERSE REPETITION ON THE lAST 2 LINES OF EACH STANZA...Gripping, indeed! FjR
Wow, Rhea gets a song for herself..and its the best i've ever read..this is by far one of your best works! !