Friday, June 21, 2013

Pyramids Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were lying together
Drinking French Kiwi Juice
While laying on our backs
In a field playing silent
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R.Benjamin Abate
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Danny Draper 24 June 2013

A very romantic piece, of metaphor and imagination.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 June 2013

Aha wow a unique idea poem soo enjoyable to read on the century old pyramids n what u cud build daydreamin. I hope u review mine latest too.

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R.Benjamin Abate

R.Benjamin Abate

Mattydale, NY
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