Friday, July 13, 2018

Pyramid Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some take a pyramid
and turn it into
a scheme.
So they run away
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M.J. Lemon
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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

Pyramidal scheme motivates mind with interesting phase of life. Chasing a career into oblivion many others may take an oblivion. An excellent poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10

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Mj Lemon 23 November 2018

Thank you, Kumarmani. Indeed, so many meanings has the humble pyramid.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 October 2018

THANKS LEMON FOR READING MY DIVALI POEM BUT YOU MUST ALSO GIVE UR INITIALS I HAD TO TRACE THRUPH

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Mj Lemon 23 November 2018

Thanks, Poet. Not sure...but doesn't the name pop out with the post? ?

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 September 2018

The pyramid does win as another one will come and say a different thing if u study the PYRAMIDS as I do you will see the worlds dictionary in a pyramid it's concealed I have studied and so I know what makes the Pyramids of Giza the ZODIACS basic show not many know...Pyramid is the basics of ASTROLOGY

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Mj Lemon 19 October 2018

The power of the pyramid! Indeed, Poet, some are mesmerized by it. Thanks so much.

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Nika Mcguin 29 August 2018

Neither of them wins, perhaps there aren't any winners in life anyway. Back to the poem, I love the way you used the idea of a pyramid here. Even if people waste their time running to the tip of the pyramid - it may be inverted. And they may become more obsolete instead of world rulers. Very interesting! Nicely written M.J.~

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Mj Lemon 19 October 2018

Thank you so very much, Nika. Yes, and I am amazed at how many people just don't realize the obvious, that a can run down.

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Unwritten Soul 30 July 2018

The pyramid, because regardless how people using it pyramid is one that control their mind hahahahaha... This is interesting point. either pyramid or spherical structure, pyramid has edges that to win against each other, only the ones that can make it stable will be the base, the highest be the top. spherical however will roll equally! then forget about pyramid scheme, call spherical scheme! haha :)

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2018

Soul, thank you so much. You may have just, I believe, invented the inverted cone! !

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Susan Williams 26 July 2018

Not only good for a chuckle it is also good for a moment of meditation- your mind is truly an amazing place to visit. I don't know that I have many original ideas for a topic- -you abound with them! ! And you never disappoint. Thank you for showing us what imagination can do! 10++++++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 27 July 2018

Thank you so much, Susan. You've made my day.

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2018

i'm not sure why, but i like this. i may be dreaming of pyramids (and Cleopatra) tonight! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Mj Lemon 26 July 2018

It's all in the power of the pyramid. Thanks, Bri.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2018

Chasing a career into oblivion is amazing but we observe continuously that there is always competition to win. You have amazingly observed pyramid to reveal its turn and people's perception to invert it. A new scheme of turnning thoughts in mind is revealed cleverly and philosophically. This poem is excellently, humorously and metaphorically presented. Your effort is appreciated...10

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Mj Lemon 25 July 2018

Kumarmani, so much appreciated. Thank you so much.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 July 2018

A no win-no win proposition! However, meditate inside the pyramid to find the answer! A real pyramid is best! A pyramid inside your mind will suffice.

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Mj Lemon 24 July 2018

Thank you so much, Richard. You have reminded me of the many ways that the pyramid stands as a metaphor for power...some connotations negative, many positive. Pyramid power...memories.

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Simone Inez Harriman 18 July 2018

I'm guessing no-one wins at the bottom of any pyramid. I remember in the 70's becoming aware of the pyramid schemes. My friend got quite involved and naturally alienated everyone including family. Not sure how the inverted triangle works. Even after googling it I got totally lost in the bamboozling hype. Not sure I'm on the right track here.

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Mj Lemon 18 July 2018

You are absolutely right. No winners in this race. I'm actually old enough to remember when those who worked with inverted pyramids were said to be involved with the 'noblest of professions.' today, we have social media..

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