Pyramid Comments

Pyramidal scheme motivates mind with interesting phase of life. Chasing a career into oblivion many others may take an oblivion. An excellent poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10

THANKS LEMON FOR READING MY DIVALI POEM BUT YOU MUST ALSO GIVE UR INITIALS I HAD TO TRACE THRUPH

The pyramid does win as another one will come and say a different thing if u study the PYRAMIDS as I do you will see the worlds dictionary in a pyramid it's concealed I have studied and so I know what makes the Pyramids of Giza the ZODIACS basic show not many know...Pyramid is the basics of ASTROLOGY

Neither of them wins, perhaps there aren't any winners in life anyway. Back to the poem, I love the way you used the idea of a pyramid here. Even if people waste their time running to the tip of the pyramid - it may be inverted. And they may become more obsolete instead of world rulers. Very interesting! Nicely written M.J.~

The pyramid, because regardless how people using it pyramid is one that control their mind hahahahaha... This is interesting point. either pyramid or spherical structure, pyramid has edges that to win against each other, only the ones that can make it stable will be the base, the highest be the top. spherical however will roll equally! then forget about pyramid scheme, call spherical scheme! haha :)

Not only good for a chuckle it is also good for a moment of meditation- your mind is truly an amazing place to visit. I don't know that I have many original ideas for a topic- -you abound with them! ! And you never disappoint. Thank you for showing us what imagination can do! 10++++++++++++++++++

i'm not sure why, but i like this. i may be dreaming of pyramids (and Cleopatra) tonight! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

Chasing a career into oblivion is amazing but we observe continuously that there is always competition to win. You have amazingly observed pyramid to reveal its turn and people's perception to invert it. A new scheme of turnning thoughts in mind is revealed cleverly and philosophically. This poem is excellently, humorously and metaphorically presented. Your effort is appreciated...10

A no win-no win proposition! However, meditate inside the pyramid to find the answer! A real pyramid is best! A pyramid inside your mind will suffice.

I'm guessing no-one wins at the bottom of any pyramid. I remember in the 70's becoming aware of the pyramid schemes. My friend got quite involved and naturally alienated everyone including family. Not sure how the inverted triangle works. Even after googling it I got totally lost in the bamboozling hype. Not sure I'm on the right track here.