Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Pygmalion And Galatea Comments

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Your sight was poignantly penetrating me within.
Your blue eyes were even more bittersweet in that opaque singleness,
and our touch was like a sad piano song.
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Marieta Maglas
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Maxim Muyu 02 October 2013

I like it, very lovely poem, keep up, excellent.

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Ramesh Rai 29 September 2013

Without any hesitation, i shall say an excellent write. emotions have been beautifully versed here.

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 11 August 2012

I like this lines You became that Pygmalion of mine, for without me.....you..... . plus the choice words. I enjoyed reading it.

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Rich with relational realities and deep in the deluge of desire... Well done my friend!

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Ravi Sathasivam 05 August 2012

our touch was like a sadness piano song. I did not know when you really wanted to exist for yourself while pretending to be existent... I like these lines. Very beautifully written although its very painful poem. Excellent Marieta. Thanks for sharing.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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