Pyar Aur Zindagi... Comments

Your poem touches the core of my heart.It is such a wonderful poem about love that is felt and lived in its separation.I have read also its English translation made by Unnikrisnan E.S..Congrats and kudos to both of you for beautiful composition and marvelous translation.

Ghalib ne kaha tha- 'Yaad-e-MaziAazabHai Ya Rab...Cheen Lay Mujh Say Hafiza Mera.) aap ne kaha hai.Ye yaadon ke fasane vi bade ajeeb hote hai Zindagi me inki kimat vi kya khub hoti hai. Thanks

Hi Kavita, Marvelous poem. The secret of life, you are trying to decipher. Ye yaadon ke fasane vi bade ajeeb hote hai Zindagi me inki kimat vi kya khub hoti hai The invaluable treasure of our fond memories make our life livable, when night falls, both literally and figuratively. Especially, the memories of love, thy lover: Uljhi si zindagi me bas suljhi si teri yaadein hi hai Jo Kavi mujhse door kavi dil ke paas hoti hai Well done, Kavita. Another evidence of your immense talent.100++

rahasya hai zindagi, right.