Saturday, May 22, 2010

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The pieces wont go
The pieces wont fit
I place them in rows
And stare and sit
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Mrs.Joseph =) 04 June 2010

This poem has slot of meaning! i love it cause i can relate to it

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Preetam Shetty 03 June 2010

My friend thats life.....a very humorous way of describing something so very serious

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Robin Machorro 23 May 2010

wow that was great :) i think everyone knows how that feels i think its something everyone has to go through with life you have a great talent :)

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Vaughn Bekker 22 May 2010

ha ha ha , funny poem dude, i think at some point in our lives we have all been down that road, keep them coming, good one: 0)

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