Monday, January 9, 2017

Puzzle Pieces Missing Comments

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When you have put together the pieces,
You will feel so proud for the picture,
Will not have those missing spaces, that
Tell us the journey is still very long.
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Sarah Mkhonza
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Mj Lemon 09 January 2017

Sarah, this is a very beautiful poem. The idea of a puzzle being brought to life and representing a journey has so many wonderful messages. It hit me- the idea of a journey demands no travel. It is, at the same time, not something that needs to exist strictly within the imagination. Putting a puzzle together does not demand relocation, and being and growing with family is itself a journey. This is one of my favourites. So well done, Sarah.

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