Sunday, October 6, 2013

Puzzle Comments

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Puzzle:
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How can I assert you –
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 24 March 2014

Being separated from the one you love is life's harshest lesson, it takes you from the one you love, yet increases your love in their absence, making you feel more intensely the pain of losing them. It is a vicious cycle, time moves us away slowly, yet the pain never dissipates and when remembered knocks us into an ocean of despair for a while. Death for those who are left behind is the cruelest side effect of true love, I think. Thank you again, Amitava for another beautiful poem, you leave a little of yourself with us in every poem. It is treasured in our hearts. RoseAnn

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Hazel Durham 21 October 2013

So heartfelt with truth of the terrible pain of seperation! Great write!

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Heather Wilkins 11 October 2013

love is eternal. it decreases with time like setting it on the back burner. but it never ends. nice ink

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Patricia Grantham 09 October 2013

Nicely written with love and admiration.The beauty of love does not go away. It merely fades with time. I have a poem titled If We Ever Meet Again. Please read when you have time. Nice write.

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Soulful Heart 08 October 2013

the puzzle of separation indeed is harsh......................like life and death, love and separation seem to be two sides of a single........

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2013

Because when love sealed the kiss to silent, it already read what you want to tell inside and Pain is a waiting moment, to mix all colorful happiness to be one light again... being far from all of them not mean we out of touch but it just amplify loudness what in heart more_Soul

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 06 October 2013

in deed melancholy and represent expression from the bottom of heart.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

A very fine poem of love expressing the pain of separation.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2013

good love good write, thanks.

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