Saturday, October 28, 2006

Put On The Brakes! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My thoughts are a spinnin'
There's smoke in the air -
Got so much confusion
It's curlin' my hair!
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Linda Ori
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Original Unknown Girl 30 October 2006

Hey Linda, this is the first of yours I've read.... very witty and I totally get where you're coming from! Like the writing somehow relieves the brain? ! Great write, will check out some more of yours... HG: -) xx

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Geoff Warden 28 October 2006

This was a fun read.......a little humour about brakes.......truly enjoyed

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 October 2006

Thats why pit-stops and time-out's were created....a common denominator amongst all peoples, everywhere....BRAKES TIME! Excellent & eye-opening write, linda...Great stuff... ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

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