Monday, November 19, 2012

Put It Right Comments

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You've got to do what is right
before it breaks your heart
your losing everything
before your very eyes
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilson 16 December 2012

Be kind, be strong but always admit when wrong, then move on., a thoughtful write Dave.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 27 November 2012

Nice advice! One shouldn't hold things for long. In this context I wish if you could find time to go through my poem-I Can Forget It- which reflects the same seed of thought. Well written.Thanks and best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

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Valerie Dohren 20 November 2012

We should put things right with ourselves, but it isn't always easy to let go. Great advice.

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Jahan Zeb 20 November 2012

We are gifted with the gift of immense intellects. Well written. Put it wright before it is too late. you knew and you know that it's not right it's now time to let it all out Excellent

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 November 2012

very inspirational! well done!

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