Monday, March 3, 2014

Puss So Peace Is Comments

Rating: 5.0

puzzled skid row kids in blankets
play with string-less tennis racquets
Alleys seem comical; buildings phenomenal
empty abdominal tables with dominoes
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Charles Monroe
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Susan Lacovara 03 March 2014

Your depiction is dead on! ! Felt as if I were there, steaming asphalt underfoot. What a picture you paint, poet friend. I saved this to my favorites. PEACE and plenty to you.

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Nika Mcguin 03 March 2014

Wow, this is amazing! Being from Louisiana, its a world completely unbeknownst to me. Still the way you paint it is brilliant - its as if I've been there and looked the skid row kids unblinkingly in the eyes. Also I'm so glad that I in some way inspired you, though honestly your soul had already written this before I think. Anyhow, Great write! ~Nika

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