Sunday, July 20, 2008

Pushing Me Away Comments

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I look at you,
You look away,
I smile at you
You just stare,
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karen morales
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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 August 2008

...a lucid but fine expression.....thanks

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Ershad Mazumder 23 July 2008

Very sweet piece. Keep on writing.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 July 2008

Succint, yet conveying the right expresssion to its fullest extent. sathya narayana

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 23 July 2008

quit cool. keep writing.

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Catrina Heart 20 July 2008

Nice write Karen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep on writing........

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