Monday, March 14, 2016

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You would never let me in.
No matter how close, you were never able to let down your defenses.
I gave all that I am.
I know it's not much but it was all I had.
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grace mariner
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Edward Kofi Louis 14 March 2016

You would never let me in! Nice piece of work.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 March 2016

You cannot survive without the hate, the anger, the pain. It's all you've ever known. What were you feeling when you laid in my arms, when I would submit all that I am to you? hate, inability to love and commit. keeping all pain to oneself...... all these facts come for in your poem. loved reading it. when problems are portrayed i read it again and again. tony

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