Wednesday, January 18, 2006
Pursuit Of Happiness Comments
Rating: ★5.0
The people who’re afraid to merge
on freeways in Los Angeles
would in the past have lacked the urge
to sail the wide world’s seven seas.
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Hugh Cobb
18 January 2006
Shalom! Good write, Gershon. This is a strong, well-crafted poem. Your rhyme scheme is subtle and well-integrated.10 from me for content and craft. All the best, Hugh
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8/25/2025 1:59:09 AM # 1.0.0
This poem has Wow factor gershon! I love it. You can sense the freedom, it is very tasty indeed, to my palate. 10 from forever yearning for that road to happiness, Tai