Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Pursuit Never Ending Never Yielding! Comments

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This life, engrossed with bewilderment
Several bygone years standby supplement
A glimpse glitters here and there but evaporates
Essence glanced here and there, literates
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Obinna Eruchie 02 August 2009

An insight on 'Pursuit never ending never yielding'. Good work, Vidi. Thanks for the piece.

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Bob Blackwell 21 June 2009

In each moment all life is captured if we are still. Your wise poems message lifes pursuit never ending never yielding is so true.

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Shashendra Amalshan 10 June 2009

Hello m'am....i went through the questions you ask..each legitimate and left lot be desired...the reader's mind's eye arouses and begin to search the answers..... and liked the last stanza too.. 'It’s human to look everywhere but within It’s superhuman to penetrate and trance within' well.. this is how i feel ma'am....i so badly want to feel that i v great courage and i can act like some super human, some indestructible person, but i always crack! ! ...cause i v seen son many indestructible super women'...... anyway this is nice write indeed, a different one 10+++ with love shan

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Kesav Easwaran 25 March 2009

'Pursuit never ending never yielding'... yes; that's life in all its brevity...good insightful write...10

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