Purposes Comments

I left some 'better' comment(s) 'last time' I think.; ( 'Responsibility' and 'purpose' aren't items I strive for in my life, though I have HAD responsibilities thrust upnn me and I've survived. That does NOT mean I've handled them well. HA! ;)

anais, I'll try leaving comments AGAIN. 'diaphanous light' I don't think those two words 'should' be paired as they are. I think 'patines' should be 'patinas'.

'Responsibility'.......yeah, it's awful sometimes! ! ! ! When I was in college (and not necessarily by my choice) I threw 'responsibility' (for 'higher education') out the window and set my 'performance' towards other goals.

Night: 'The period between sunset and sunrise, especially the hours of darkness.' To refer to a 'surface color', the word is petina, not petine. : )

1st line: I think you are stretching 'poetic license' to use diaphonous to describe 'light' and to call such a time of day 'night'. Let me look up 'night'. ;)