Thursday, October 11, 2012

Purpose? ! Comments

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Why am I here?
Why do I have
to stay alive?
Why can't I have
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Elena Sandu
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* Sunprincess * 24 June 2014

.............wow this is an original idea I feel....adding this write to my poem collection.....loved the form, also...

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Kanav Justa 29 November 2012

lovee yourr style, , , , ,

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Aung Si 19 October 2012

good job! beautiful penning with fantastic style.Well done! ! !

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Wabi Sabi 16 October 2012

I want to stay alive for a few more times of happiness, then I'll beg more... Oh! there happiness is, taking a nap in the middle of the day! ! hahahah I sometimes feeeeeeel myself needy for happiness, and am afraid how much more needy I will be....

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Hans Vr 14 October 2012

Elena, I love this poem. Deep questions asked in a moment of darkness(?) Would it be nice or cruel if we can give away some of time to others? I am not so sure, Elena. One thing I am sure, that life is something with ups and downs, With darkness and sunrises I am quite sure that soon people will be willing to give some their minutes or even hours of day to you.

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Valsa George 12 October 2012

Life has to be lived out...! . There may be ups and downs, but they are not permanent... hard times will follow joyful times.... So cheer up! A moving write!

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Anita Sehgal 12 October 2012

profound questions... one can only live and find the answers...

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