If the necessity of life's' call is same
Why does it keep rolling like a ball game?
If I were a bird, I'll fly from one fruit tree to the other
If I were a lion, I'll dominate from one jungle to the other
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Nice poem, you put alot of good facts in it, i like it. keep it up
Apothegm poem clutches with the generations, means all creeds and colors. The rhythmical lines were added in the poem would be more attractiveness and competitive one.
my frnd., you are a doctor and u can realise the pain and feelings of your patient well and as being a poet u may realise the nature too. So it is an xlent creation. u have completed the deficiency in my poem, ïf I were. ur this poetic talent will be of great help in your profession too. keep it up. never think if any one is reading ur poem or not.
Good poem. Each individual has got a purpose to fulfill on this earth. It is our duty search for that purpose, and we can do that by looking deep into ourselves. Thanks.
a great piece, i believe it speaks volumes well done