Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Purpose Comments

Rating: 4.6

If the necessity of life's' call is same
Why does it keep rolling like a ball game?
If I were a bird, I'll fly from one fruit tree to the other
If I were a lion, I'll dominate from one jungle to the other
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Ngwa Louis
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Kelvin Owusu 21 December 2013

a great piece, i believe it speaks volumes well done

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Shanice Rodriguez 09 August 2012

Nice poem, you put alot of good facts in it, i like it. keep it up

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 09 August 2012

Apothegm poem clutches with the generations, means all creeds and colors. The rhythmical lines were added in the poem would be more attractiveness and competitive one.

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Ramesh Rai 08 August 2012

my frnd., you are a doctor and u can realise the pain and feelings of your patient well and as being a poet u may realise the nature too. So it is an xlent creation. u have completed the deficiency in my poem, ïf I were. ur this poetic talent will be of great help in your profession too. keep it up. never think if any one is reading ur poem or not.

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Kelvin Owusu 08 August 2012

i like this, has a real good message, good work

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Deepak Manchanda 07 August 2012

Purpose...a powerful thought for a poem.

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James T. Abel Adesitimi 07 August 2012

nice poem. It touches my heart. Keep it up.

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Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah 07 August 2012

Good poem. Each individual has got a purpose to fulfill on this earth. It is our duty search for that purpose, and we can do that by looking deep into ourselves. Thanks.

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