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I have been watching for your poems, glad to see you have started, the rest will be easier just give it time.Enjoyed this one.

we will leaves the earth.do the best you can

This is beautiful, Aisha. Thanks for putting things into perspective.

Aisha, this is lovely. If this is what you've been worried about submitting, I'd have to say you've been worried for nothing. See, I told you to take a chance! !

This is quite good, I like it. Well-written with a good flow. It gives me a feeling of gentleness, kindness. One correction: your/not ur. Otherwise, a very enjoyable read and hope to see more of your poetry.

very well thought out. i like it. continue writing. -Justin