Thursday, November 18, 2004

Purple Comments

Rating: 3.8

Purple is afraid
it scuttles into corners
on all fours
it reeks
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Philippa Lane
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Frank Avon 19 January 2015

Well, I'll never look a purple the same way again. Never. Splendid poem, whisks me away, persuades me as I resist. This ain't what purple means to me, but while I read your poem I entertain no doubts. I may have to write a response to this one: Purple is plush, / it's velvet crushed / it dances away at dusk / it insists on itself / and envelops one in the semblance / of macroeconomic sensuality. / Purple is plush.

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Sandra Feldman 19 January 2015

Yes, it is a funereal color so vividly and well expressed in this poem along with other strange things that make purple, in my view a color to avoid, even in a rose.

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Patricia Gale 04 June 2006

The way you have painted this read with such descriptive wording is of true talent! Patricia Gale

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Scarborough Gypsy 30 March 2005

Philippa, Not your favourite colour then? I like the way you have chosen the words that sound well together. It grows and flows but certainly ain't prose. Thanks again for helping me sister Warm regards SG

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Robert Rorabeck 01 March 2005

this poem is a bit of genious

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Netia Anatexis 01 March 2005

Perhaps I am too biased as Phillipa's daughter, but I love this poem. As a young teenager, it had such an impact on me that I began composing my own poems (none of which were ever as good as my mother's but luckily that wasn't the point) .

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Herbert Nehrlich1 27 February 2005

Magnifique! Correct spelling errors please. Poem is great. H

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Chichester, West Sussex, England
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