Tuesday, May 6, 2014

Purple Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked on a royal carpet today
From the steps on my backdoor
Clear through all the potted plants
All brimming with purple bells
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 17 May 2014

Your poetic vision is wonderful.

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May these purple days forever so linger And you find more of them in days to come In the grasp of your grandsons little finger May you always find pure love and warmth of the sun.... Excellent write Sir....Keep ur pen busy

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Stephen W 06 May 2014

A nice poem, delicately wrought. The fashionable omission of punctuation from the ends of the lines is unhelpful, in my opinion.

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