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Purity With Release Comments

Rating: 4.5

Purity With Release

A gesture, pure like mountain rain,
A moment, shared and still remains,
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Sarah Persson
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Khairul Ahsan 26 August 2020

An excellent poem seeking to release the earthly tensions and achieve purity of mother nature. 'Adapt my heart to hear the sighs' - A poetic urge par excellence! 'Surpass my body, encase my mind, Purity i seek and find, For I'm no longer the wandering child, My age at last has smoothed the wild' - Loved these lines too!

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