Friday, February 16, 2018

Purity Comments

Rating: 5.0

They have come so far.
But she still feels uneasy about her breast scar.
He kisses her scar.
And let her know that she will always be his shining star.
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Lamar Cole
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Practicing Poetess 17 February 2018

Now, THAT'S Real Love! The world at large will cast people aside because of their scars, while someone committed to truly loving you will embrace you, scars and all. A perfect poetic picture of true love, rarely seen. Good job, Lamar!

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Rini. 16 February 2018

Beautiful poem about purity in love..10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 February 2018

Lamar, such a great lovely poem👍👍👍

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