Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Purification Comments

Rating: 5.0

Come bare your Soul,
A Poem song,
Is all you have to write,
Then you'll be cleansed,
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Sandra Feldman
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Amitava Sur 26 June 2014

A philosophic thought had percolated down through those few concrete lines. Very well done

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Chuy Amante 25 June 2014

SF you're on a roll! but, Bare my sole? My sandals I'll keep That's all i own without I'd weep

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