Thursday, October 11, 2007

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Together in loves caress,
Fast beating heart, the only is “yes”.
I smile as I look into his eyes,
Heavy breathing and satisfied sighs.
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J T 14 October 2007

*ahem* i think im a little young to be reading this haha. Great poem, I'm with Celine, while i read it, it felt like i was watching it happen, 'i could see every movement'. You have a great telent when it comes to poems, i wish mine were as good as yours

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