Saturday, September 19, 2015

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©Seema Jayaraman, Mumbai,19Sep2015

White doves in the sky
Endless, formless white of light
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2016

Endless, formless white of light... white doves. the womb..... a wonderful combination of thoughts and words. dear seema.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2015

Deeply envisioned and aptly depicted. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. ....10

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Seema Jayaraman 19 September 2015

Thank you Sir this is an early attempt at Haiku though it's technicalities are still confusing

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