Purest At The Soul..... Comments

Pretty clothes, priceless ornaments Can't make your soul glow... Such a great truth dear Naila. tony

Very true, Naila Rais, but the so-called civil we always hide feelings and wear masks. A lovely poem, full marks.

I too like correction only if it's true, the original arrangement of can't make you glow works just fine. Just like the light shining it already applies itself to the inner being or soul. Of course it's my opinion just the same as the correction was Bri Edwards. Very nice poem 10+

very well written miss naila.....we need purity in our soul... nothing else matters...great job....a big 10...keep it up

(cont.) **i don't need to know your answer, but if you want me to know, send a message, as i rarely return to a poem page after i finish commenting. Can't make you glow... your meaning is NOT CLEAR, with these words. how about Can't make your soul (or personality) glow? ? bri ;)

(cont.) **i don't need to know your answer, but if you want me to know, send a message, as i rarely return to a poem page after i finish commenting. Can't make you glow... your meaning is NOT CLEAR, with these words. how about Can't make your soul (or personality) glow? ? bri ;) i would send to MyPoemList IF not for ace... and the last line.

Can't hide your ace... what do you mean by ace here? when i think of ace i usually think of one of the cards in a deck of playing cards, but also means one who is an expert, such as a baseball ace. could you have meant acne or disgrace? but i think you didn't mean either.** . (cont.)

well then the poem appears to have been misunderstood as i now read your comments kindly delete please my regrets

how truthfully you show but they seem to alone glow cars rides show well done to you also in poetry you alone will GLOW

Can't make you glow... in one verse at the last you tell it all. a great philosophy of love and innocence and simplicity.. tony

A great philosophical poem so nicely executed. Unless the soul is pure no beauty and wealth glorify the lifestyle. Thank you dear Naila, improve day by day.10

Beautiful poem. That are for outer beauty only. A person with a pure soul has the true beauty. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem Naila.Enjoyed.