Moring has arrived and new light is seen,
Crows are doing caw, caw to awaken,
Time is refreshing moment of appearance,
Sun is smiling in far eastern horizon.
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Dear poets, thank you very much for taking time and commenting. Your effort is highly appreciated. May God bring happiness for you..@Morning Air
Morning air carries purity and we feel pure essence. God gives us wisdom and we feel his mercy. Swinging in his wisdom is our fortune. We love God very much. With love and hope we are growing with him. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.
Morning air has greater breath of freshness. This poem is truly a lovely gem. This is interestingly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this.
Devotional attitudes are seen in leaves, Trees are twisting their turn towards light, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Very good use of imagery to make your point strong as well as beautiful. Our souls do turn to the light until we have twisted our instincts with our bad choices. Well chosen topic to write upon.
The beauty of sunrise and the crisp clean feel of morning air. Great use of imagery to recreate this feeling of oneness with the universal spirit of god.
Pure morning air refreshes our minds. We love such freshness and motivate eagerness. This poem is interesting one.