Monday, July 9, 2012

Purely Pleasure Comments

Rating: 4.0

Upon shadowed perch
We devour, dance & sing
Our passion ignites
Watch the pendulum swing
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CarolAnne Spalding
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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 June 2015

Erotic piece of writing.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 December 2013

This is a very nice poem, replete with feelings of pure passion. 'Eager lips lock while bodies join Orgasmic explosions anticipate' Beautiful! The last stanza is fascinating.

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Abraham Jaggernauth 09 July 2012

This is very good, and displays a nice spin of pleasure and love, with very good words.

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CarolAnne Spalding

CarolAnne Spalding

Toronto, Ontario
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