Friday, October 26, 2007

Pure, White Cloud Comments

Rating: 4.8

Excuse me, please,
I need to drift
To a more auspicious place
Where my time-weary face
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Uriah Hamilton
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Susan Williams 06 October 2018

There is still something special Within my soul That I must not allow The treacherous to kill. - - - yes! let us each guard our souls and keep them, as innocent as possible

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Sandra Fowler 31 October 2007

Your poetic picture is painted on that pure white cloud. Very touching, Uriah. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 27 October 2007

This is a distinctly enigmatic piece Uriah, written with your usual skill and poetic finesse. A conflict between the higher and lower self, perhaps? Love the cloud metaphor. Warmly, Allie xxxx

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