Sunday, June 23, 2013

Pure, The Horizon Calls (For A Friend) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pure, the horizon calls
Pon lands by crystal sea
Past tiny windows ever grey
A cell constructed of fog
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Danny Draper
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Karen Sinclair 23 October 2013

Danny this is just such a beautiful write. It is laced with compassion and consideration. Two of your many attributes. Loved this piece so much. Thank you for sharing. Karen

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Soulful Heart 13 July 2013

A sort of release that reminds.......stpne walls dp not a prison....a poet can never b traped in any bound epoch ...

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R.j. Wynn 28 June 2013

Back to read again, oohrah!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 June 2013

the knowledge of the poets makes wonders in life..Good Expression Danny Draper..10

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R.benjamin Abate 25 June 2013

Love it, Danny. Especially The poet soars and/ The artist realises the greatness/ Of freedom of expression and self/ And imagination

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Valerie Dohren 25 June 2013

A complex but interesting read Danny, some beautiful lines in there and a great tribute to all poets and those with an artistic and creative mind. Agree with Valsa that you are above the average writer.

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Ruth Walters 25 June 2013

nicked for conspiring to be loved loved this line: D

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

The poet and the artist have an upper edge over the others whose thoughts are shackled and their expression stifled! They can soar into infinite spaces without the cold cloud walls of restrictions to see, reach and explore! Before the artist and the poet, all windows are open! Danny you have beautifully brought in the contrast between these two worlds! (I wonder, if my interpretation of your poem makes any sense! You are indeed above average poets, I must say and a little obscure too!)

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Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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