Monday, October 2, 2006

Pure Flight Comments

Rating: 4.9

A single hawk flies cold above the flowers,
Momentum quickly focused by the hour.
The mood requires warm bones against the frost,
Before the pattern is forever lost.
...
Read full text

Sandra Fowler
COMMENTS
premji premji 27 July 2009

sandraji, that hawk is nothing but your soul... and the flight, i love to call it: poetry..........

0 0 Reply

a visual treat to the mind...trying to recreate the scenery through your fine poem...a treat

0 0 Reply
Cindy Kreiner Sera 30 June 2009

Your words pure magic as they capture the lone flight of the hawk and drops a poem into your hands..thank you Sandra - the hawk, my favourite

0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 01 June 2007

You capture the solitary nature of your hawk with skill and grace in this majestic poem about the passing of time and the beauty of the seasons. I also pick up an emotional sub plot of regret and sweet sadness. Masterful poetry. love, Allie xxxx

0 0 Reply
Will Barber 09 October 2006

Many moods and images are captured here - so many poets have praised this work, I merely wish to echo their thoughts. 'Warm bones against the frost' is what the spirit requires, always - the sun always westers, forever. - Will

0 0 Reply
Brian Dorn 06 October 2006

Sandra, visually stunning... simply 'pure' poetry! Brian

0 0 Reply
Mary Naylor 06 October 2006

A stunning piece. The drama of your words impacts the soul. My Best, Mary

0 0 Reply
Cecil (cj) Krieger 05 October 2006

Beautiful piece... beautifully imaginative

0 0 Reply
Duncan Wyllie 03 October 2006

Lovely piece, the freedom to soar on the wing, beautiful Love duncan X

0 0 Reply
Nimal Dunuhinga 03 October 2006

'A sharp eye of the poetess who captures a lonely bird is flying in a sunset. This is another rare song indeed of the fading twilight' Your observation is great in the mysterious sky. Take care my friend.

0 0 Reply
R H 03 October 2006

Only this morning, walking my dog, I watched as a lone bird swooped and soared, shadow below and blue sky above. This poem is a wonderful piece of observation, a moment captured in time's passing light. Justine

0 0 Reply
Patrick Ladbrooke 03 October 2006

Captures well the urgency and beauty of the hawk hunting, against the more abstract passing of time beneath it. Patrick

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 02 October 2006

Sandra's eyes are like a camera that catches vivid picture of what she observes from the sky or on the earth. Another flash back of a single hawk and its background in the form of word-picture-poem to Sandra's credit.

0 0 Reply
Uriah Hamilton 02 October 2006

Your poem flows like those out-stretched wings veering majectically.

0 0 Reply
Robert Howard 02 October 2006

There is something sacramental in the quiet graceful flight of a hawk. You have captured it with elegance and grace. Robert

0 0 Reply
Sylvia Spencer 02 October 2006

Sandra this is another beautiful poem and so pleasing to read, your words never fail you to write such lovely poetry. Cheers Sylvie

0 0 Reply
Esther Leclerc 02 October 2006

Sandra, your poetry never fails to please... This is a lonely moment captured perfectly. The final line says it all. Love to you! Esther : ]

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
Close
Error Success