Saturday, March 7, 2009

Pure Ecstacy! (Sensual) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone at last we lie together
The gentle bonding of our lips
sets my heart alight.....
our tongues entwine......
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Tracey TEE
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Carl Harris 07 March 2009

Well, this is wonderfully done, Stacy, as your words are alive with sensuality and excitement in this all too brief but exceptionally well written poem! This is the kind of poem that makes a woman reader quickly want to have a bubble bath or a male reader recognize the need for a cold shower! And your ending! ....hotter than a radiator full of steam on a winter day! Carl.

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