Pure Delight Comments

i dropped a pebble and watched the ripple until the waters edge then your pure delight and your ability to listen to the unheard of music. very nice poem thank you

And it is a pure delight to read. Beautifully written Mary well done

Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow A beautiful poem which gives the impression of spring in its entirety. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

Bursting with a beauty that is bucolic.and causes one to say nature nice!

Spring's rapport with days of yore. What a great line.

I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple Until the waters edge Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow Beautiful!

It's a pure delight to imagine the imagery you pictured. 'I dropped a pebble and watched the ripple Until the waters edge Tis with pure delight I sat amidst the trees And listened to the music flow ' As though I am sitting beside you and watching this!

very nice.pure and raw ink.keep inking.

Indeed unique and interesting free verse, the feeling of peace is poignant. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

Beautiful poem, full of meaning and very well written. A great metaphor.