Monday, September 4, 2017

Pure Beauty Is Beast Comments

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In the shade of the forest,
I shift on my feet,
A nervousness thumps in my brain,
With each step I take,
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Sarah Persson
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 May 2018

It twitches and paws at the ground, And then in an instance, It bolts and is gone, Purer beauty in a creature, I haven't yet found. Am i searching for beauty every where. in fact all poets and poetesses do that...... we look for beauty everywhere........ your beginning of the poem was very attractive full of tension and finally you come to the answer. tha nk u dear poetess. t ony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 September 2017

It is a highly imaginative poem having stunning expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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