Pure And Distilled Water Comments

A thought provoking poem that conveys a strong message. I liked the last four lines of this piece, so beautifully crafted. A magnificent poem.10

There are people who pollute the pure distilled water with toxic minerals! They should know that pure water of love is life sustaining and nourishing. Let our Mother Earth turn into a well spring of clear, unpolluted water of love that all can quench their thirst! A poem embodying a beautiful message!

where can i get some of that water 'polluted' with love? ? ? ? is it costly? ? ? in last line, someone dropped a t from Let. right? ? i'd send you a t, if i knew how to get it to you. bri :)

A lovely poem! My favorite lines are the first two lines: My thirst needs a glass of water/from the vast jug of mother earth....Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)

Most of us pollute the pure water adding minerals that lead to their creator. And what are the minerals? Coexistence, human brotherhood, tolerance and love above all.........touching expression with nice theme. Water of love is too poluted. A beautiful metaphorical and philosophical poem has been shared by u, dear Akhtar ji, startlingly.10