Pure And Distilled Water Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Pure And Distilled Water

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My thirst needs a glass of water
from the vast jug of mother earth.
Adam to the modern thinkers,
uncountable great men sipped water from the jug
added a new mineral to it.
I have no control on my heart
I don't know how it fell in love with Muhammad,
(peace be upon him) .
I love all the minerals but the mineral he added
I truly love it.
My body goes on changing.
Every new day brings a new disease for me.
Every day it needs a new mineral.
Even Angels were asked to drink the water of Adam,
and the one who refused to drink it
and said it was polluted by a man made of clay
and that he could drink only pure distilled water.
Wish the learned one would have drunk that polluted water!
He drank the pure and distilled water
and promised to teach the art of pollution,
to the sons and daughters of Adam and Eve.
But he forgot Adam and Eve had hearts
That can contract and capture the eternal beauty.
Most of us pollute the pure water
adding minerals that lead to their creator.
And what are the minerals?
Coexistence, human brotherhood, tolerance
and love above all.
I confess a few of us pollute the water with dirt,
that lead to their destroyer,
adding lust, extremism, terror, and war,
hate above all!
Keep your pure and distilled water for you
for me it's only for the external use.
I have plenty of water polluted with love,
It's in accordance with my internal needs,
let me drink it for my beautiful heart.
Let my heart beat on the pure tunes of love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A thought provoking poem that conveys a strong message. I liked the last four lines of this piece, so beautifully crafted. A magnificent poem.10

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Valsa George 08 May 2018

There are people who pollute the pure distilled water with toxic minerals! They should know that pure water of love is life sustaining and nourishing. Let our Mother Earth turn into a well spring of clear, unpolluted water of love that all can quench their thirst! A poem embodying a beautiful message!

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Bri Edwards 07 May 2018

where can i get some of that water 'polluted' with love? ? ? ? is it costly? ? ? in last line, someone dropped a t from Let. right? ? i'd send you a t, if i knew how to get it to you. bri :)

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Akhtar Jawad 07 May 2018

Thanks Dear Teacher, I acknowledge receipt of the T- sent by you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 May 2018

A lovely poem! My favorite lines are the first two lines: My thirst needs a glass of water/from the vast jug of mother earth....Thanks dear sir for sharing! (10)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 May 2018

Most of us pollute the pure water adding minerals that lead to their creator. And what are the minerals? Coexistence, human brotherhood, tolerance and love above all.........touching expression with nice theme. Water of love is too poluted. A beautiful metaphorical and philosophical poem has been shared by u, dear Akhtar ji, startlingly.10

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