Purblind Comments

To see the true beauty around one needs an inner eye which resides in one's heart....very well penned sir..a beautiful poem filled with lovely images...10

Thinking of heart and mind in bright light of vision explores the depths of universe relating to our prospects our stray dreams find their reality

i agree. i love this one. GREAT JOB! i give it a 10: D

A plea of the vision-impaired through words... 'to see Wrapped up in the primordial fog Waiting since life's beginning Some one's eyes! '...very touching and carefully written....excellent

Wonderful imagery and i can hear the music. Expertly depicted. Thank you for sharing your talent :)

A magical creation full of music and darkness..still, here darkness is promising a pure bright light..10++++ Best wishes. A.

This is such a powerful poem that even the reprimand in it commands acceptability. The best thing is that it spares none.

The eyes of the true poet can set the world alight for his readers. Thank you for sharing what you have seen through the windows of your soul. Shine on, Naseer. Warm regards, Sandra

a deep insight that comes like a flash of lightening at unexpected moments in life, when one is calm, filled with love and compassion. amazing images, disturbing, uplifting leaving me in tumult, compelling to introspect.how rare are such moments... we are too preoccupied to take note of life around us in all its shades and, light or no light- are blind. Mamta

a blind date....with a special moment to remember....a giving of oneself, just to let other live....I cried and say goodbye of what was there which is not fair, yet! Wonder of the day to come of what is beautiful in the memories of the past.....how i wish to settle in one way as it could be....now your poem satisfy my thirst of what is today.....God bless....a 10+++++++

we are blind to so many...light of insight from this write....lovely

Forgot to add 10+++ for such a beautiful work.

An excellent write, goes right into the heart and provokes deeper pondering. I think the flash wouldn't do, on the other hand a complete new pair of eyes might work. Greetings! Keep shining! Regards

good job.really, congratulations.

This light is the end of hate, the embrace of all of us in an all-around-the-world circle of union... i hope some day this kind of light is gonna shine over us all. hugs.

Yes, if we could only allow ourselves to see with our hearts, we could see all this and more, no flashlight required :) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Yes i would! I love the poem!

pretty nice message and meaningful words keep writing!

powerful, lovely and intense lines...

wow for that ending..i just loved it..that one while his light is hidden by a fogy life waiting some one to light his place may be to save him or to let him flourish by that seeing eyes..do some die while waiting that light, , why they can't fight that fogy part of thier life...what it needs is a little hole in that closed doors to let the light invade suddenly the dark souls which kept blind while seeking and waiting some lights..10+++++ ...some one were to flash a light Would you be able to see Wrapped up in the primordial fog Waiting since life's beginning Some one's eyes!