Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Puppets Dont Have A Say Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cast upon the stairs
less alive than heaped rugs
My family, a bed of bugs
As soul mate, for a dead soul
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Seema Chowdhury 10 March 2009

hi Jatin, a nice poem, flow is nice and your feelings are flowing smothly one after another and fits in its place. keep up the good work and elcome to poemhunter.

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Kesav Easwaran 10 March 2009

yes; puppets don't have a say...they only get swayed...the picture you provide here is dark...and the colors you prefer are still darker...but the lines inside are solid and thick and they talk poetry strongly...poetry from a revolting rebellious mind...10

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