Monday, January 23, 2006

Puppeteer Comments

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The puppeteer
On the catwalk
Above the stage
Looks down at you all
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Christina Moore
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Gina Onyemaechi 26 January 2006

Strong opening, well-developed middle, skilled finish. I see the contradiction in the speaker's actions (...your actions, Christina?) : 'playing' someone doesn't protect you from your emotions. It just doubles the blow, twisting you into something sordid which you know you resent. Kind regards, Gina.

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Christina Moore

Christina Moore

Ottawa, Ont. CA
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