Pupils Comments

interesting and amazing too, a good job.

very good flow of words.........a very good poem.....

nice...i liked dis poem..gud language.

Quite interesting and it fooled me with the title and subject. I liked it! Write On

I like it! If this is what you call free verse, it's still poetry to me. It has rhyme and a measure of rhythm and THAT'S what poetry is all about. All else is prose and prose by any other name is still prose.

A good thought expressed in a good free verse, a great write.