Pupa Comments

Very nice! Your writing is so full of heart. No dry, passionless words ever coming from you.(smile)

Interesting and fine..

wow, short one, exciting too this is cool, luwi

short, succinct n surreal!

a beautiful four liner piece.

A LOVELY THOUGHT FROM KESAV JI, EXPRESSED THROUGH HIS POETRY! 10 + from Raj Nandy.

indeed a beautiful four liner.the silent contemplation of the exuberance that lies ahead.lovely10++++++++++

How come you gone this shy? i love this one..it; s compact..and very nice...Kesav..10+ Ramin

'My flamboyant butterfly, how come you gone this shy' Rachel Ann Butler

brilliant.. i think it is.. brilliant.

very beautiful poem regards

Wow! ! ! This is a stunning poem.......Terrific poetry.

Is it going back in time from flamboyance to shyness, or silence needs to flambouyant. Intriguing conversation between the two, both appearting happy any way. Smartly crafted and much thought in it.10

that’s wonderful indeed....................

A sweet talk to butterfly... Ohhh Thats so superb, its being shy You have brought before us, the life of this beautiful fly. Symbol of Happiness... is butterfly, very natural to ply Silent in tarnce for a while and then bloom into the open sky. Yes.. at the pupa stage.. its silent, we can understand its plight At youth, dear poet, it is sure to be shy to pose so bright May be it knows you are at your window, for a sight. My my my... this is so so so sweet talk of yours With superb style... Love it...

You are truly versatile in explaining all the marvels of nature through your imaginative poems Kesav..this one is just delighful..I like the line 'How come you gone this shy' it gives the poem that little extra +...

change is inevitable...sometimes we want to hold on to things as they are....but in time we must let go....

a beautifully dressed butterfly from a pupa...a four line wonder...and you make me wonder your craft in this art of poetry is amazing...lovely sir...10

'How come you gone this shy? '....meaningful line...all about the metamorphosis in awe of a butterfly....very poetic though short...thank you

a sheath of silence conceals great turbulance beneath? ? ?